http://jadekitty777.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] jadekitty777.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] onepiece_300 2012-11-15 08:38 am (UTC)

Oooh, nice use of the prompt here. I loved it!

I like the idea of the 'hunger' being not a physical entity but rather a mental one here. It does make you think where they will be when they achieve their dreams, and how much they'd miss adventuring towards them.

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