Date: 2013-05-27 02:33 pm (UTC)
Give me a second to do this first:

AAAH YASOPP! *tackles him* Go get your girl so you can make my BBY!

Speaking of him though, he's so lovestruck here, it's cute! For probably obviously biased reasons, I really think he and Banchina are adorable together.
And Shanks turning all red when he and Makino meet eyes, fff. Makino is such a sweetie and I always like seeing her in ficlets~
I feel bad for them though, having to compete with Benn since if the OP fan base is any indication, he's probably a total babe to all the girls~ Somehow I feel like he's getting the girls' numbers FOR Shanks and Yasopp though, since he knows his friends haven't quite gotten brave enough to do it themselves. He seems like the kind of awesome friend who would do that xD
Also aah I like Bell-mere's appearance too; you really captured her troublemaker attitude! She reminds me of Nami so much here that I almost expect her to blackmail the boys for money lol.

Fff and then Rayleigh... gosh it makes me think Roger is the principal. Next thing we know, the next generation we'll have Luffy showing up being all 'I'M GONNA BE KING OF THE STUDENTS'. Okay, I'm done lol!

Nice work it was a great read xD!
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