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Title: start again
Media: fic (poetry - random, ne?)
Word Count: 118
Characters: Zoro and Luffy
Rating: G
Prompt: 'new beginnings'
Notes: A poem about Zoro finding his feet


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Proud child

Determined

Would be the best

The strongest

Never give up.

Never give in.

Beaten

By her

But worse

Everything changed.

To take up her dream

He must

Start again.


Proud young man

Determined

Would be the best

The strongest

Never give up.

Never give in.

Beaten

By him

But worse

Everything changed.

To pursue her dream

He must

Start again.


And now a boy stood before him

Proud

Determined

Would be the best

The strongest

Never give up.

Never give in.

Beaten

Again.

And again.

And again.

But would never see defeat

Or pain

Or fear

But instead would rise

And start again.





And everything changed

And Zoro found

He was finally ready

For a new beginning.


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Comments

[thisistony.livejournal.com]

Oooh, I don't think I've ever seen a poem in here before! :D Good job!

[synvamp.livejournal.com]

Yeah, I was a bit nervous... So I'm glad that you liked it :D

I usually write rhyming verse so it's twice as random *lol*

[synvamp.livejournal.com]

*phew!* I'm really happy you enjoyed it! I like it but it's totally different to my usual writing style. I love poetry so it's nice to finally put a poem in to the comp XD

[riah-chan.livejournal.com]

I liked this a lot. Very in character.

[printfogey.livejournal.com]

Stark and tense, the rhythm and the theme fit Zoro very well. Good work. Nice to see a poem here again!