Moar Ace, because that's what I do
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onepiece_300Title: Freedom and Family
Rating:G
Media: Fic
Characters: Tiny!Ace and Tinier!Luffy
Pairing: Ace/sleep
Word Count: 299
Prompt: Family
Old prompt but I'm new-ish to the comm and I have stuff so I figure I'll share anyways :D
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Freedom and Family
"Ace" poke poke.
"Ace!" poke pok- he grabs the offending limb and Luffy yelps when Ace hurls him at the wall, where his brother makes a satisfying noise of rubber striking wood.
"You are awake!" Little brothers should not sound so happy about being tossed into walls. And they absolutely should not sound so awake this – early, late? – at this time of night!
The sound of rubber feet padding over the floor and then Luffy climbs into Ace's bed. The better to pester him.
Ace kicks him out.
Luffy climbs back in.
Ace resigns himself to no sleep and hopes that whatever has caught Luffy's fancy doesn't take long.
But Luffy is silent - and unnaturally still, breathing quietly into Ace ear where he is curled up next to him - for so long time, Ace figures he has fallen asleep. Just as he decides this is just another of his brother's strange whims and braces himself for the discomfort of an extra body’s warmth through the summer heat, Luffy's voice breaks the silence again.
"Do you want to be the Pirate King?"
"No."
"Is it because I'm gonna be the Pirate King?"
"No."
Silence again. And – had Luffy actually thought he was somehow standing in Ace's way?
"You're really strong."
"Mmmm."
"You could be, if you wanted to - I'd have to kick your ass because I'm gonna be the Pirate King, but you could be."
Ace wants freedom. He wants to roam the seas beholden to no one and nothing.
"No thanks."
Pirates Kings have public executions, not freedom. They have legends, not families. He has no use for Pirates Kings.
But he'll make an exception for Luffy, if his brother ever reaches his impossible dream.
"Want to be my first mate?"
"Sleep, Luffy."
Rating:G
Media: Fic
Characters: Tiny!Ace and Tinier!Luffy
Pairing: Ace/sleep
Word Count: 299
Prompt: Family
Old prompt but I'm new-ish to the comm and I have stuff so I figure I'll share anyways :D
Betaed by
naye who is fantastic at it. Thank you. :D also she writes good fic, go seeFreedom and Family
"Ace" poke poke.
"Ace!" poke pok- he grabs the offending limb and Luffy yelps when Ace hurls him at the wall, where his brother makes a satisfying noise of rubber striking wood.
"You are awake!" Little brothers should not sound so happy about being tossed into walls. And they absolutely should not sound so awake this – early, late? – at this time of night!
The sound of rubber feet padding over the floor and then Luffy climbs into Ace's bed. The better to pester him.
Ace kicks him out.
Luffy climbs back in.
Ace resigns himself to no sleep and hopes that whatever has caught Luffy's fancy doesn't take long.
But Luffy is silent - and unnaturally still, breathing quietly into Ace ear where he is curled up next to him - for so long time, Ace figures he has fallen asleep. Just as he decides this is just another of his brother's strange whims and braces himself for the discomfort of an extra body’s warmth through the summer heat, Luffy's voice breaks the silence again.
"Do you want to be the Pirate King?"
"No."
"Is it because I'm gonna be the Pirate King?"
"No."
Silence again. And – had Luffy actually thought he was somehow standing in Ace's way?
"You're really strong."
"Mmmm."
"You could be, if you wanted to - I'd have to kick your ass because I'm gonna be the Pirate King, but you could be."
Ace wants freedom. He wants to roam the seas beholden to no one and nothing.
"No thanks."
Pirates Kings have public executions, not freedom. They have legends, not families. He has no use for Pirates Kings.
But he'll make an exception for Luffy, if his brother ever reaches his impossible dream.
"Want to be my first mate?"
"Sleep, Luffy."
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Date: 2009-07-25 04:12 am (UTC)better now?
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Date: 2009-07-25 02:14 pm (UTC)Yes, that was very much my thought process: Ace needs hugs, Ace needs cuddles with his brother...fic! ^^
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Date: 2009-07-25 06:18 am (UTC)This is perfect! So sweet and cute and perfectly Luffy. And this:
Pirates Kings have public executions, not freedom. They have legends, not families. He has no use for Pirates Kings.
That'd be Ace's impression, indeed! Aww.
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Date: 2009-07-25 02:53 pm (UTC)He's Such. An Angst Muffin! haha
perfectly Luffy
XD
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Date: 2009-07-25 03:51 pm (UTC)And young luffy is so cute XD
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Date: 2009-07-25 03:58 pm (UTC)young luffy is so cute
He is! And I'd say I want a tiny!luffy to cuddle but...
no, no I don't XP Too. Much. TROUBLE
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Date: 2009-07-25 07:07 pm (UTC)(Seriously, there's so many old fics - some of mine, too - about these boys' backstories that have suddenly become invalid after chapter 550 and 551. But we knew the risks setting out...)
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Date: 2009-07-26 12:07 am (UTC)suddenly become invalid after chapter 550 and 551
Teehee, I wrote a fic two days before chapter 551 came out and it was so Jossed I'm still laughing about it!