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Oct. 28th, 2009 07:37 pmIt's been a long time since I've been able to write something this short. Nitpicks are much appreciated – I figure the fewer words there are, the more mistakes will stand out.
Title: She Ain't Heavy, She's My Sister
Rating: G
Media: fic
Characters: Nami, Nojiko
Word Count: 133
Prompt: Reliance
Spoilers/Setting: Set before the series starts. The only spoiler is Nami's background.
She was told about it, once; the small child carrying a baby among the corpses, stumbling across a third survivor, a battle-scarred Marine. And then they were a family.
Throughout her childhood, Nojiko was there, one step ahead, ready to scold and protect, explain and play.
Nami's relying on no-one but herself, now. But if there wasn't for this one person in the whole world trusting her, believing she'll be able to do it, she wonders if there'd be anything left of the real Nami at all.
It may be for the best that she's the one with the mapmaking skills, not Nojiko. Sure, her sister might handle being in Arlong's crew and gathering treasure. But Nami couldn't do what she does - could never offer as much support as Nojiko's strong, tattooed shoulder.
Title: She Ain't Heavy, She's My Sister
Rating: G
Media: fic
Characters: Nami, Nojiko
Word Count: 133
Prompt: Reliance
Spoilers/Setting: Set before the series starts. The only spoiler is Nami's background.
She was told about it, once; the small child carrying a baby among the corpses, stumbling across a third survivor, a battle-scarred Marine. And then they were a family.
Throughout her childhood, Nojiko was there, one step ahead, ready to scold and protect, explain and play.
Nami's relying on no-one but herself, now. But if there wasn't for this one person in the whole world trusting her, believing she'll be able to do it, she wonders if there'd be anything left of the real Nami at all.
It may be for the best that she's the one with the mapmaking skills, not Nojiko. Sure, her sister might handle being in Arlong's crew and gathering treasure. But Nami couldn't do what she does - could never offer as much support as Nojiko's strong, tattooed shoulder.
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Date: 2009-10-28 07:14 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-10-28 07:13 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-10-28 07:16 pm (UTC)Thank you, very glad you liked it!
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Date: 2009-10-28 10:55 pm (UTC)I love how you captured everything that Nojiko is to Nami in just a few words...
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Date: 2009-10-29 07:39 am (UTC)(I was aiming for a real drabble, but fell short (or, long ;)) again. Still, more succinct than usual! \o/)
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Date: 2009-10-29 03:45 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-10-29 07:42 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-11-06 03:39 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-11-06 09:09 am (UTC)...Oh my, that's a very pretty icon. Is that Oda art or extremely good fan art? I can't remember having seen it before...
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Date: 2009-11-07 12:15 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-11-07 12:29 pm (UTC)