Nightmare much

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Title: Nightmare much 
Genre: comedy?
Word count: 286
Characters: Ace, Whitebeard, Marco, Luffy, Jozu
Pairing: Hints to Marco/Ace
Prompt: Nightmare
A/N: SO yeah, Lol, tried my hands at comedy hear, eventhough I seriously love the prompt I wanted to write something more serious and maybe a bit more dramatic, I came with this instead. Though I have to admit I still like it. >.< Hope you all like it to. the longer version can be found over at my own journal. http://catiprojectc.livejournal.com/12039.html

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His steps sounded hollow in the abandoned galley. Suspiciously looking at every shadow he found himself eventually wonder into the dining hall. All was silent…

“ACCCCCCCCCEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!”

Before he even could react his brothers arms had entangled him close to him into a crushing hug. Slightly laughing he tried to pry the personal space intruder off. To no avail.

“Luffy let.. l-let go your choking me”

Looking down at his brothers face an which had an eerie grin he felt his heart start pumping louder in his chest.

“I’m not letting go of Ace anymore.. “

Suddenly it became darker around Ace, looking up his eyes widen in shock as his old man seemed to… fall down?

“Com’n son, give Papa a big hug… “

Ace his eyes widened even more of fear as he screamed out…

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“WHAAA!”

Ace opend his eyes, while screaming frantically moving his arms and legs to sit up. He panted and looked around. He was in his room, there were was no Luffy, or Oyaji to crush him with their hugs.

He exhaled a deep sigh while shivering, he loved the two of them but that dream had seemed scarily real. Stiffening as he felt arms close around his waist..

“Hey sweety what happened..”

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Thus became the fourth night of the fifth month after Ace his rescue the night where the crew on the Moby Dick got awakened by an un-manly shriek.

“So.. what happened again.. and what do I tell the others? “ Jozu asked while looking at Marco who was poking an unconscious Ace.

“Nightmare? I don’t know he fainted when I hugged him.. Tell the others that we sailed over a Sea king or something.. that should explain his shriek.. “
 

Comments

[arcielfreeder.livejournal.com]

*drastic laughter had made me fall more than three times on the ground*

UWAAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! This is just too funny!!! Yeah--

"Com’n son, give Papa a big hug… "

That IS considered a nightmare!! XDD
I love this, cati!!! And comedy-- yes! You succeeded!
Although, I bet a serious one from you would be cool too! <3<3

[catiprojectc.livejournal.com]

YEEY *flails of hapiness* I'm so happy you liked it. :D and found it funny as well cause that was my intention. XD

Uh.. I think it'd be safe to hug whitebeard, but .. I mean.. the man's big so getting a hug FROM him, would require some saftey messures ((just kidding cause seriously theman is awsome!!) XD

I'm really happy you liked it, thank you for your comment.!
I might .. make a serious one but not enter it in this challenge but with the same prompt. :D who knows.

[arcielfreeder.livejournal.com]

YES!! VERY VERY FUNNY THAT I EVEN DREAMT OF IT YESTERDAY!!! *0*

Ahahahahaha!! Yeah-- better be careful! XDD
Nobody wants to be squished too much, right??

Yes, you're welcome! You deserve, dear! <3<3<3
And a serious one-- I'll be there to read it whenever I get online! <3

[catiprojectc.livejournal.com]

XD NO WAY! SO AWSOME! I WANT TO DREAM OF IT AS WELL!

Lol, yeah.. careful, still poor ace. *lol*
Well people who can take it I guess don't mind being squished but yeah. XD

Thanks again *hugs* you're the best!
XD Lol I'll see to it that it will be magnificent!

[arcielfreeder.livejournal.com]

WAAHH!! Let's hope you do tonight! ♥♥♥

Me too! I don't mind being squished as long as I can still breath! XDD

You're welcome! You're the best too!! *hugs back*
YEY! I'm excited to see!! ♥♥♥

[catiprojectc.livejournal.com]

No, not tonight I did not dream of them. *sob* better luck tonight I guess. *hugs and laughs*

I don't mind being squished either. ^^ I wouldn't mind to much at all.!
Aaaaaw we're both the best. :D *hugs*

I hope I won't dissapoint you.

[elisha2kings.livejournal.com]

unmanly shriek Pfft! Poor Ace, you really need to get free and start kicking some righteous Marine butt before anyone's gonna think of you as manly anymore!

This was so cute! Yes Ace loves his little brother and Papabeard, but not enough to get smooshed by their crushing love! Although since he's a Logia at least he has an escape route, of sorts! Loved the last bit as well! Great job.

[catiprojectc.livejournal.com]

Lol Lol! yes yes, he better, the crew can't have losing faith in him now. don't worry Jozu will make sure the crew believes it was indeed a sea king that made that unmanly shriek. XD

Thank you for your comment though. :D I'm happy you liked the idea. _{who knows .. paralysed by fear.? XD}